feedback for blog buddy

 






Are the initial ideas and development clear?

Was the research completed and was it clearly linked to the advert?
Was the process shown with commentary about tools?
Was the final outcome clear?  Could there be any improvements?

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  1. InsomniaOctober 19, 2022 at 7:49 AM

    The idea and development is clear. You need to complete the research and link it to your advert. There was great in depth detail for every little process. The final advert was clear however the logo isn't clear and doesn't contrast the background well. The watch is too low quality and also doesn't contrast the background well. I think changing the background would help most of your issues. The idea is clear and the tagline is catchy.

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